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He runs his fingers through her hair,
Her soft, shiny, silky, hair...
Her bright blue eyes,
Flashing happy,
Because she loves him,
And he loves her...
She lightly kisses him on the cheek,
And he does the same...
Because she loves him,
And he loves her...

Standing at the lover's lane landing,
He grasps her hand,
And reaches into his pocket,
Pulling out a small box,
Covered in blue silk...
She starts to cry tears of joy,
As he turnes to her,
Going down on one knee,
He smiled and asked
"Will you marry me?"
©2005-2009 ~keroka
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um... dont ask...
It was an attempt @ something new

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:iconcuge:
That is really sweet. You've got awesome ideas ;)

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~Naky~
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Your poetry never ceases to amaze me beyond all boundaries!... So... touching... I normally didn't use to become sad or joyful with poetry often, only in very few occasions...
But almost all of your poetry makes me... drop a few tears, because they're just that beautiful... :+fav: :thanks:
:iconshy-girl27:
Omg gin thats soo cute I love it :glomp:

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:iconkeroka:
awww... thank you!

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^_^ thank u carla

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Thank u Naky!!!

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